Someone wrote in [personal profile] exomeme 2012-12-14 08:18 am (UTC)

Re: http://anonfeedback.livejournal.com/526.html?thread=280078#t280078

i actually agree with this part of the crit? consistency of diction is important, and "get back" rly doesn't go with "soaring cabriole," unless she's going for an ironic idk junot diaz kind of feel? which doesn't seem to be the case here.
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