omg anon ty so much ;; so i'm trying to go through complex sentences (and asking for help from my friends too fml) but i still can't quite understand the grammar but basically...use...shorter sentences....?
i feel like i do have a tendency to get carried away with my commas so i'll just keep on trying to cut down even more haha /o\
Re: ITT: constructive crit for HG!
i feel like i do have a tendency to get carried away with my commas so i'll just keep on trying to cut down even more haha /o\