Someone wrote in [personal profile] exomeme 2012-12-14 07:46 am (UTC)

Re: http://anonfeedback.livejournal.com/526.html?thread=280078#t280078

"But Jongin understands people best through dance. He itches now to throw off all his clothes, get back to that soaring cabriole," for instant in this quote: Jongin "itches" to throw off his clothes, but why just to "get back" to that soaring cabriole? "Get back" is after 2pm coffe "get back" to work. "Get back" is weekend's-over's "get back" to school. "Get back" isn't effectively strong and precise enough to describe someone who yearns to SOAR into a cabriole again.

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