♡ bombameme ♡ ([personal profile] exomeme) wrote2012-12-11 09:30 pm
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part six


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(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
speaking of zodiac, has anyone ever noticed the "sameness" in dialogue? idk if i can describe it accurately, but basically all the characters like using 'i just-" or 'i can't-" to open sentences or just that weird stutter when saying anything, no matter how funny or sad or dramatic the dialogue is supposed to be. it really bugs me because it's found in every chapter at least 5 times or more, and i have a hard time believing that every member of the party talks like that.

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:12 am (UTC)(link)
read another fic ;)

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
i have a hard time wrapping my head around WHY IT IS LABELED TAORIS WHEN THERE IS NONE :(

+1

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
THE TAORIS IS A LIE ;~;

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
even though they gave kaisoo a mammoth sidestory, the main story still focuses on kaisoo too. all the other otps are just trimmings.

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
+1 every other otp in that story moves at a snail's pace except kaisoo. selu has picked up a little but they're still so slow compared to kaisoo's progress

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
i'm like the only kaisoo stan who hasn't read that (maybe i read some smut from it but that's it) but dystopian au isn't rly my thing

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
selu still has more development than taoris and baekyeol :(

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
but kaisoo still has more development than all 3 otps combined

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
i would think it's natural considering luhan (apart from kai) is the most important character in the story. doesn't make the lack of baekyeol and taoris any less sad tho.

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
i've seen black_goose around since she first joined kpop fandom and i'm disappointed that her writing has not improved like, at all

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
i get the impression that most of zodiac is written by umberela actually, especially with the dialogue :\ everyone talks like her

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
she's written some really good stuff :( lemme go digging

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
all of exo talk like umberela in that fic, what's new.

(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
I'M STILL PRESSED AT THE SHITTY BAEKYEOL RECONCILIATION like i wanted ache and drama and it was so... flat
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