idk, it's more like we were exploring the same ideas (it was a character study fic), but that fic manages to do it right and do it in a more complex manner. nothing i can do by fixing the ending or the progression of the plot. ig i'll concentrate on my other wips. my writerly kokoro is too broken atm to learn something from this fic lol.
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(Anonymous) 2012-12-13 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)