♡ bombameme ♡ ([personal profile] exomeme) wrote2013-01-11 02:58 pm
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part twelve


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Re: to get meme in the mood

(Anonymous) 2013-01-12 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
lol i know.

give me some synonyms then?

Re: to get meme in the mood

(Anonymous) 2013-01-12 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
i would just say ass or reword the sentence. and go for more sensuality in your writing, rn it reads as mechanical and flat.

sry to critique ur porn

Re: to get meme in the mood

(Anonymous) 2013-01-12 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
thank you for your expertise in literary erotica anon.

i will try harder next time.

Re: to get meme in the mood

(Anonymous) 2013-01-12 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
baww
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