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part two hundred and seventeen

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there's this one porn fic i rly liked but i also was kind of wary of how much it emphasized how straight one opger was and kept on bringing up how hyperaware he was that he was fucking a dude but okay with it because he was better than a girl

where? because i like in denial fics

ty good person

sa i thought there'd be more of it. there's only 3 allusions to baekhyun not being a girl but it's good

i'm sure it wasn't the authornon's attentions but gah i hate that u__u it always comes off as very idk i can't think of the word but it makes my skin crawl

da heteronormative?

yes thank you! and i really like gay panic in fic when it's done as an intentional thing? but this didn't come off that way to me so it hit my skeevy button.

but it's not something only this author is guilty of pls don't feel bad it's a really easy trap because we read shit like this all the time in fic "his lips were soft like a girl's but his grip was strong like a man" or something you know

liiiinkkk pls

and is it ponifiable?

idg what's wrong with that

was it baekchen

yeah

the porn was hot but i'm just not into the whole ~he may not be a girl, but he's better~ trope

mte when i read it

~~same~~

linkur juseyo

da the porn is okay, but just a note to the authornon pls don't use epithets

i feel stupid for asking but what's an epithet?

da same ;;

the blonde boy, the younger boy, the taller boy, etc

ohh okay. what sort of things would you put in place of those without sounding repetitive using the character's name over and over?

not my fic but i'd always like to improve as a writer :[

names are the best to use tbh. using pronouns can be really confusing at times with two boys but think about how you can characterize them via dialogue, gestures, etc so that they are distinct

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(Anonymous) - 2014-07-17 02:56 (UTC) - Expand

replacement for a name when you can just use the name. you might think you're using their names too much but it's really not noticeable

i have a problem with that then myself but i always feel like i've used their names too much. :[

to me names are not noticeable. they blend into the fic and i barely register them. epithets? i notice. they pull me out of the fic. idt there's anything wrong with sticking with names

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(Anonymous) - 2014-07-17 02:56 (UTC) - Expand

da but i think it's one of those things you as an author notice more than the author. just like how varying dialogue tags isn't rly as important as some authors think and just sticking to the simple ones is fine/often better than trying too hard to vary them