can someone who's good at fight scenes help me on my battle sequencing? i find action writing difficult and when i read back on this i don't think this came out nearly as powerful as i wanted. i'm not quite sure what it is about the battle that i don't like, but it feels like it's missing something?
Re: itt: constructive criticism
can someone who's good at fight scenes help me on my battle sequencing? i find action writing difficult and when i read back on this i don't think this came out nearly as powerful as i wanted. i'm not quite sure what it is about the battle that i don't like, but it feels like it's missing something?