part two hundred and forty two

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[(Anonymous)]

lots of unnecessary words, too many opgers/ships at once, awkward expositional dialogue, generally what most longfics suffer from lol. you can tell right from reading the first 1k or so

[(Anonymous)]

yikes looks like it might've needed a little more (a lot more?) work. ty for the input anon, i'll check it out then decide if i want to read it to the end o/