part seventy two

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EUREUREONG EUREUREONG EUREUREONG（●＾o＾●）

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

when is the next round of eliminations? i need to know how much i should push myself to get these two ficlets done

Re: ITT: constructive crit for HG!

[(Anonymous)]

omg anon ty so much ;; so i'm trying to go through complex sentences (and asking for help from my friends too fml) but i still can't quite understand the grammar but basically...use...shorter sentences....?

i feel like i do have a tendency to get carried away with my commas so i'll just keep on trying to cut down even more haha /o\

Re: hg: perils of broomstick flying (team cccm, baozi)

[(Anonymous)]

anon u did not just combined hg's canon otps in one fic and kill them after all that cute. /shakes fist at u

[(Anonymous)]

apparently in 2 days? less than 48 hours?

^

[(Anonymous)]

sobs ty anons n_n

it was just such a cute image idk if i have anything else planned lol ;;;;

Re: hg: perils of broomstick flying (team cccm, baozi)

[(Anonymous)]

cries you just wrote my fic in <15w ;;;;

Re: hg: perils of broomstick flying (team cccm, baozi)

[(Anonymous)]

ANON NO omg

[(Anonymous)]

"prepare for trouble!" baekhyun shouts as the taller boy mirrors his formation to the left. "and make it double! to protect the nation..."

"chennnn," the meowth grins, "that's right!"

jongin takes half to pause before his umbreon hyper beams the trio straight in the face. from behind him sehun squints into the horizon to watch them fly into the stars.

"that's impressive," he comments, "you didn't even have to say a word."

jongin shrugs, pulling out a berry to give to the umbreon. "it's happened often enough that even he gets it."

the umbreon nods happily into his touch and half way across the world there are three newly shaped holes in the ground.

Re: ITT: constructive crit for HG!

[(Anonymous)]

not so much shorter sentences as...well basically, you have a lot of modifiers and dependent clauses elaborating on your independent clauses. for some of your sentences, those modifiers are unnecessary. your sentence gets the point across just as well without the dependent clause as it would with it. so just try not to over-elaborate every little detail!

commas are good but too many commas starts to look messy. >: try experimenting with semicolons, or even just making more individual sentences.

Re: hg: perils of broomstick flying (team cccm, baozi)

[(Anonymous)]

lol i'm sorry anon /o\;; /w-wags tail at u?

[(Anonymous)]

i've read one on sncj (but it was baeksoo iirc?). it was rly qt

[(Anonymous)]

48 hours to save your oppar

it's dangerous to go alone, take this frying pan

[(Anonymous)]

lmao god i am a slow writer. both of them will probably be 4k or less combined and i'm still whining this much

[(Anonymous)]

*baekchen team rocket fic i'm on it

[(Anonymous)]

lmfao anon

Re: hg: perils of broomstick flying (team cccm, baozi)

[(Anonymous)]

lol hides i'm sry /o\;;

Re: here!

[(Anonymous)]

hahaha i need continuation like burning omg

[(Anonymous)]

yes please

Re: ITT: constructive crit for HG!

[(Anonymous)]

...there's too many words here that i can dictionary define but can't figure out what they mean together rn i'm so sorry anon ;~; I'M GOING TO TAKE SOME TIME TO MULL THIS OVER AND DIGEST THIS and take your advice to heart! although i do understand the part of not over-elaborating so i'll start keeping that in mind right away!

i'm so sorry i'm so bad at this grammar thing and english thing i'm seriously so terrible at it

semicolons and periods, here i come haha

[(Anonymous)]

omfg yes

[(Anonymous)]

da but

i love all the frying pans we've had

[(Anonymous)]

ty anon, that's super helpful :*

i only remember bits and pieces of my childhood lol

[(Anonymous)]

lmao

[(Anonymous)]

anon this is great

[(Anonymous)]

gj anon!